D#5 H#3

I learned a couple of things from Jennifer and James research proposals. I think that they both had plans and structure to their research question. If there is one thing that I can improve on in my research proposal it would be the clarity/structure of my research plan. Reviewing their proposals gave me an idea of how precise we need to be when conducting our research question. Another thing that I believe I need to work on is to focus on stating more facts in my papers, rather than my own personal opinion. No one has edited my research proposal, so I can’t reflect on what I need to change in other people’s opinion. After looking at the turnitin website, I could not find an originality report, so I cannot comment on that either.