After reviewing Jacqueline’s and Brittany’s bibliographies, I realized that there are some things I need to work on for mine. One major thing is an opening paragraph about my research subject. I did not include this in my draft. I was not sure if it was necessary, but after looking at other classmates bibliographies I realized that I should have one as well. I also believe that I need to work on giving more background when citing about my sources. I think that I could gather more information about the sources that would lead to a better annotated bibliography.
I had one peer review comment from Ashley Oberst. She gave me a helpful tip about the layout of my bibliography. After receiving her comment, I now realize that there should be more of a distinguished break between my citations and paragraphs. This will hopefully lead to a bibliography that is easier to read and not confusing.
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